Monday, May 12, 2008

Ashvins* Comments

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O Ashvins, sacrificial offerings claim,
Luster and well-being you proclaim.
Folded hands we pray you came,
For amazing deeds you have name.
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C. P. Sharma
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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 May 2009

Thank you for sharing this nice spiritual work.

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Indira Renganathan 14 August 2008

To be read a poem for all those Devatas.Nice attempt.Thank you

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Vaibhav Shah 22 May 2008

Really a great poem.The whole poem is indianized and giving the freshness of the theme.Saraswati-The Goddess of Knowledge, Indra-The God of Rain are known to the whole world.You have done a fantastic job as it gives us an opportunity to know about Indian Classics in such a pure environment.10\10

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Abha Sharma 13 May 2008

I had little knowledge about Ashvins so this poem is like a blessing to my knowledge... Thank you for the poetical, mythical treat... **Abha**

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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