Friday, June 20, 2014

Ashtray! Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Beautiful hall
Everything kept intact and
Each thing arranged neatly
A decorative touch by artistic hand.
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Neela Nath Das 25 June 2014

Thru the central metaphor of ashtray you expressed the thought of the poem.Loved the lines- - - - Ashes may be of ones frustration removed Ashes may be ones anger burnt Ashes may be ones ego burnt Ashes may be someones uncontrolled habits May be of pain or sorrow or may be for fun or May be of simply nothing.

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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2014

The ashtray contains the frustration ego wrath...... but still alive which are not yet extinguished.

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Ashes connote fire was and fire symbolises many a thing........Geetha........a great write with a great narration...........

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Valsa George 20 June 2014

Ashes may be of ones frustration removed Ashes may be ones anger burnt Ashes may be ones ego burnt Oh.... How many thoughts an ashtray has generated in your fertile imagination, Geetha! Enjoyed!

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Amitava Sur 20 June 2014

This is lovely Geetha, a beautiful thought provoking poem instigating to think a lot..... truly enjoyed

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Vijay Sai R 20 June 2014

a poem on ash tray...wow...great to read..and ashes are so important if you view spiritually...

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