Sunday, January 17, 2016

Ashk Bhi Beshumaar Laayee Hoon! Comments

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Dil meN tere hi Gham ka toofaaN hai
Teri Hasrat hai tera armaaN hai
Bin tere zindagee biyaabaaN hai
Daaman-e taar taar laayee hooN
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Aarifa Almas 12 March 2016

Phir bhi ghum hi iski qismath Hai.. Ek ek alfaaz aapke is ghazal ke mutaassir kar Dene Wali hain.. Ishq woh adaa jismei saza bhi aur maza bhi Hai...

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 26 February 2016

Aah-o naala ka ik samander hai Rooh zaKhmee hai dil bhi muztar hai Ik ajab aag dil ke ander hai Dekh lo Haal-e zaar laayee hooN Ashk bhi beshumaar laayee hooN Khubsoorat bol aur khubsoorat fann e izhaar bhi layee hoon! aapki tareef me hai. Qubool karein Aarzooji. aapki qalam me koi jaduu hai Khuda karam aap par bahut bada hai. aapki har poem har nazm har ghazal meri hausla afzaaii karti hai.

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Mithilesh Yadav 28 January 2016

grrt penned mam ji............ ankhon ki ansuon sey un dosti si ho gyi hai........ mere dil aur dimag iljam lagatey hain ek dujhey pey....... jaisey meri deh koi aadalat si ho gyi hai........

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2016

Knowledge! To feel love with life. Hairat hai! Laaye hoon. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2016

Knowledge! To feel love withv

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2016

Lajawab auor mtasir kun nazm hay, Hakim Momin Khan Momin ki tarah takhallus ko bhaut khoobsoorati ke sath istemal kiya geya hay.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2016

Ghame-dil mein aur kya milega kuch ansoo, kuch tanhayi....Bahut khoob....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 January 2016

There is cyclone of grief in mind and heart. I do not know up to how many days I have to cry but now I realize not to do so to feel love and life. This is entirely a thoughtful poem shared in wise mind. Wonderful drafting shared on.10

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