Saturday, August 6, 2005

Ashes To Ashes Comments

Rating: 3.3

I laughed because I did not have
what it would take in normal times
to cry for him. I had not practiced,
after all, boys will be boys but they,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 22 September 2005

Very nice....we always wonder when....

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Raynette Eitel 06 August 2005

Your humorous poems are great fun, but you are at your best here. Lovely poem, Herbert. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 06 August 2005

Vivid poem Herbert, I never know if you are writing from your own life....(making this a memory from when you were 10 yrs old) or just creatively reaching. Either way, this is very good. Sincerely, Mary

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