Will you remember me
After I’m gone?
[[ a s h e s to a s h e s,
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This is very interesting, i like the lines, creativity and messages. Keep it up, you are very good.
What a great poem and what a great poetess you are. I have to be like everyone else this poem is a prefect 10 poem.
So when I rest in peace Under the earth so cold Will you remember me? u r perfectly grown as poetess.. no doubt abt it....10 read mine rest is piece
Awww of course I'll remember you! :) I love your descriptive language and use of lining. And the thingamahjiggy in the chorus or refrain or whatever. You know, the [[a s h e s to a s h e s, d u s t to d u s t ]] thing. Nice job! 10+++++++++++++
ashes to ashes...dust to dust...yes, you will be remembered by your poems....keep it up...