Sunday, June 13, 2010

Ashes To Ashes Comments

Rating: 4.9

Will you remember me
After I’m gone?

[[ a s h e s to a s h e s,
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Leslie Ching
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isatou Juwara 01 September 2012

ashes to ashes...dust to dust...yes, you will be remembered by your poems....keep it up...

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Fubara Benstowe 11 July 2010

This is very interesting, i like the lines, creativity and messages. Keep it up, you are very good.

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Craig Mize 15 June 2010

What a great poem and what a great poetess you are. I have to be like everyone else this poem is a prefect 10 poem.

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So when I rest in peace Under the earth so cold Will you remember me? u r perfectly grown as poetess.. no doubt abt it....10 read mine rest is piece

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Surelychoo Certain 13 June 2010

Awww of course I'll remember you! :) I love your descriptive language and use of lining. And the thingamahjiggy in the chorus or refrain or whatever. You know, the [[a s h e s to a s h e s, d u s t to d u s t ]] thing. Nice job! 10+++++++++++++

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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