Ashes Of Old Lovers Comments

Exactly, the ashes of old lovers should be treated the way poetess has opined... wonderful poem.

Left behind... Like me... Like what we had... Like what it was When it was us... unforgiving smoke........ your wounds, and ur decison to let go...... wonderful. tony

Like the ashes of old loves, your poem will remain to haunt your readers, even when we exhale a deep sigh of sadness.10+

One of the wonders of poetry is that the brilliant ones, the immensely well created and deeply felt ones, Never grow old! This one, that you so emotionally and poignantly wrote, won't get old either. Great poem!

This is just brilliant! ! I love the wonderful imagery and how the words just draw one in and live the experience..thank you so much for sharing +10 Lodigiana x

The ashes of old lovers inhale and exhale! /// excellent poem

Dying twice It shocked but moved me emotionally. Becoming one with you again through toxic smoke.

Most enjoyable. Shall read it again?

The title seduced and the words enthralled me. How different we each are superficially and how alike in our depths..

urgghh! Words from a pained heart. this heart needs a stronger pull of love to erase the memory of the past. beautifully written

A great moving on poem from the ashes of an old love. You've captured the euphoric moment of the final release.

Drawing deep! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

Poetic perfection! such a pleasure to read What else can I add that hasn't already been said

Absolute delight! Beautiful rendition of words with deep insight. Thanks for sharing Susan.

Hi Susan, Fantastic poem: There it laid what remained of your snuffed out cigar Just lying there... Left behind... Like me... How! What an expression of ultimate sorrow of a neglected and discarded soul! Heart-rending, touching. Excellent.

I love this poem. Great title too.

Never thought way, comparison is par excellence, great imagery and nice flow....10+++

Really great imagery of ashes...and ashes in action. Interesting. And yes, I love the ending. Well written. I enjoyed this one. Thanks.

These lines reveal your poetic sense and its elegance.... There, before my eyes The ashes of old lovers To be dumped... discarded...emptied rinsed way... And the lines that emanate a sense of depth in understanding human mind are But first, I light it... Set fire to it's end inhale, and hold the thick unforgiving smoke... Drawing deep the pungent pleasure... And exhale... Thanks dear Susan for the lovely cute creation. Subhas

make sure to blow smoke rings and laugh! ! !