Ashes Of Love Comments

Awesome! You express yourself very well, a descriptive poet! I know, cause we have many things in common to our poems.. I'm inviting you to visit my poetry!

Wow, I’m touched, impressed and speechless. It’s very deep, strong and gloomy. Your words are golden and your idea is unique; it’ll stick in the mind of your reader for ages. I’m NOT exaggerating but seriously this is beyond amazing and I think you are a great poet with a great natural talent. Keep up the good work I wouldn't change anything

Hi Blue eyes, your poems are very much real and experiences that i relate to through thought or real life. I like this poem, your a great poet

Startling originality. Written with music and passion. 10, from me. Kind regards, Sandra

excellent. really enjoyed reading this

Wow Im serious you are amazingly good I love it!

I am one of those who has taken many lives to learn that the omnipresent God is inside each of us.. providing all we need. I no longer need be under the illusion that one needs completion from another. It has been a very bitter school.

Good job keep it up!

A unique poem in description and style. Last two lines are wonderful.

your ending is amazing! ! ! I love it! such strong work and really cool message. great job. Becca

i love your style.... your works are great...feelings are express really from heart very convincing enough for every reader to feel the pain...very touching and soulfull.....more power...more splendid write to share with us... Merry Christmas.....

Wow! IT's a really great poem!

Your poems are fantastic! Keep going on, you're fabulous. Please could you comment some of my poems. That's will be a honor for me.

I really love the rhyme scheme in this. I find it hard to rhyme without sounding light and somewhat childish, but you manage it beautifully.

Wow! Impressive! The rhymes..the words..the emotions! It's really great! ..are you really 20? ...

This is a really refreshing poem to read. I enjoyed and appreciated it so much, and I was particularly impressed with your rhyming scheme. Well done!

If you really love me Gaze on the sky When it is midnight You will see me Among the twinkling stars If you really love me Feel me within your soul I shall be always with you.

wow i wish i was capable of something like this but i'm not i was blown away by this poem.... Amanda

Quite romantic and passionate, explores the kind of love that transcends beyond life after death! A 10.

A heart in your writing beats i love the way it makes m e think and if i shall never read i would love to hear this poem forever speak please write more for me