Thursday, February 21, 2019

Ashes Of Each Dead Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

She loved him with all that she had,
Yet he broke her leaving her sad,
She tried and tried to put up with him,
Yet he destroyed it all in a manner so grim,
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Daya Nandan
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Hans Vr 21 February 2019

This is written so nicely with very smooth flowing rhymes. I love the feelings and the meaning expressed. Most challenges make us stronger. Breaking up a relationship that did not work may be indeed often a blessing in disguise Excellent

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Naila Rais 21 February 2019

So beautiful............. perfect 10 Naila

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