Ashes Divide Comments

this could be better if recorded, put an audio background, and put it in a CD... then distribute it... nice poem here...

I love it. Regards Ron

Like the lily ^^our favorite flower! ! hahah hah i like it! ! ! ! going under my favorites :) mills

Ashes Divide is beautiful.. Even the title catches your emotions.. =) .. I'm so so so proud of you my dear friend.. Gambateh ne~!

I really like this. Like its one of my favrots. I really like how it starts out all nice and sweet, but you ended it like all sad. I cant tell you how much I like it.: ]

I really like the last two verses :)

Just to let you know... around me lilies blossoms so nice. Its wilt for a while.. but will and always be blossoms again. Cheer up :)