Thursday, September 25, 2014

Ashes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind bellows.
Its voice spreads like wild fire
across fields of sun-kissed wheat.
A single sunflower sways at the touch
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Argentine Tango
COMMENTS
Connor Whyte 14 March 2016

Oh my this is beautiful I really like your use of imagery in this poem!

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Abekah Emmanuel 06 October 2014

Your admiration for nature is clearly displayed in this nicely written poem. In fact, nature has lots of beautiful scenes that are worth viewing and this description in your poem does just that. I like it.........keep it up!

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 01 October 2014

Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this poem.

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