Friday, December 28, 2012

Ashes Comments

Rating: 4.2

Light extinguished, glimmer defeated,
spread across my heart, a sacred scar
the oxygen of time a cliched healer,
locked in a cage my joy hath retreated.
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Barbara Nixon
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 March 2014

void of logic or sensibility the flutterer will return another season. full of hope and it is well expressed..

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2013

So beautifully written with amazing lines, excellent write!

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Saadat Tahir 29 December 2012

unusual rhyme scheme....on the abca pattern. dont come accross this aften. It places a self imposed constraint on the poet and clearlt shows poetic ability. constextually....well.....its xmas time and new yera...yet the sleet and dark weighs heavy. lovely blessings

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Owain Glyn 29 December 2012

Clever use of language, loved it!

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