Ashes Comments

void of logic or sensibility the flutterer will return another season. full of hope and it is well expressed..

So beautifully written with amazing lines, excellent write!

unusual rhyme scheme....on the abca pattern. dont come accross this aften. It places a self imposed constraint on the poet and clearlt shows poetic ability. constextually....well.....its xmas time and new yera...yet the sleet and dark weighs heavy. lovely blessings

Clever use of language, loved it!