Saturday, May 28, 2011

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The clock stopped ticking an hour ago
The breeze has seized
All that is left is the wait
Everything around me seems to wither
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Brian Purdy 27 February 2012

You put me there. You put me right there at the nerve-endings. You put me - as directly as words can do - directly in touch with how it feels to be you, feeling as you did in the moments this poem has given form. You have a powerful gift with words. Whether you will, or not, you have a calling. I wish you strength, passion and good health to use it well. I salute you. - Bep.

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