Monday, October 2, 2006

Ashes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Something is falling from the air
You would think that it is snow
But it is grey as well as white
It lays now on everything, like a blanket
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 January 2007

Very crisp & mellifluous quilling, young lady...Well crafted...finely structured...Kudos! ~F. j. R. ~

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Scarlett Treat 02 October 2006

I have read accounts of the ashes in the air and the smell when the German ovens were fired up, but it goes so far beyond anything I can understand, of one human to another, that it is almost beyond understanding. I KNOW it happened, but how to understand it, I don't know. The gathering of jewelry, and the gold in teeth, and making lampshades of human skin - beyond thinking!

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