Ashes Comments

There is much passion in your thoughts, thank you for this moment

molecules... a fine poem put here.

Fine wording! ammmmmmazing poem! 10+

Carol you know what true love is...Your passion is so evident.... loved it...Alf

Yes there is desire in us to achieve union with beloved..........in a lower consciousness it is manifest as a desire to be one with beloved and in a higher consciousness same desire is manifest as a desire to be one with the God........Good Write........10+++

The flow and feel of this poem is really nice...good to read and feel...thanks