Sunday, February 15, 2009

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Rating: 4.8

There is passion
lightning bolts
arcing between us
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CAROL HUGHES
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Paul Cutting 09 September 2009

There is much passion in your thoughts, thank you for this moment

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molecules... a fine poem put here.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 August 2009

Fine wording! ammmmmmazing poem! 10+

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Alf Hutchison 23 May 2009

Carol you know what true love is...Your passion is so evident.... loved it...Alf

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 March 2009

Yes there is desire in us to achieve union with beloved..........in a lower consciousness it is manifest as a desire to be one with beloved and in a higher consciousness same desire is manifest as a desire to be one with the God........Good Write........10+++

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 March 2009

The flow and feel of this poem is really nice...good to read and feel...thanks

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