Ashes Comments

And then we spend forever struggling to scrub the stain from out hands. This...really good.

What a good and realistic way to forge ahead when the bliss of love has ended! Burning words of love to ashes and taking things in stride. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A wonderful poem of emotion and putting those things behind... Moving ahead in confidence. Enjoyable read! ; D

VThey now are only ashes. No flames of love remain. Here no Phoenix lies in wait; For love, to rise again.....excellent and out standing.. clear expression of views in assertive way.. i am amazed at choosing of words.....10 read mine an end to solitude....clear emotions

such heartfelt words, with a touch of grace and elegance. nicely penned.

Yes dear freind.......... there is no wait for any love, but what i am seeing that there is consideration about love beautifully written poem

Beautiful poem you are a artist...........................write more: {

A beautiful and sensitive write.Enjoyed it very much.

a wonderful catharsis penned for others to gain that wisdom and insight, , noting that while there is remorse there is no resentment, , , a man who yes has met himself before his arrival.....

ryhming poems are the funniest but also the most touching in my opinion :) sweet job

i love it its awesome...keep up the good work

very poetic....words so brilliant..... a brilliant piece as a whole..so elegant.... meaningful..... eradicating any memories left....? i love the thoughts of this piece...

you know the way to finish the things, no chance to rise again... the message it's so clear as it can be.

very poetic and deep i love the emotion you put into your poem i loved it very good that poem is something my hero Edgar Allan Poe would have wrote

Absolutely loved it.+++++++++++

I have to say this is one of the best poems I have ever read. Nicely written.

Now this is one powerful write! The only problem is, one thinks that in burning what used to be, the feelings will also subside. But they don't do they? We can delete, erase and eradicate, until the cows come home, but the emotions remain, etched into the very fabric of one's soul. Mo One of my favs.

a 10! no questions asked

A marvelous poem, I’m not sure I’ve read a better piece about terminating a lover. The poem is a flame throwing and I loved it.

very emotional poem...loved the way intense things are simply expressed. thank you.