Saturday, July 7, 2007

Ashanti Boy Comments

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Shining black moon
Thrilled with teeth
Come to our shores
Of gold and grief
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Yvonne Rautenbach
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Robert Howard 13 September 2008

This strikes me as a kind of verbal pointillism. After you connect all the dots and fill in the spaces a fairly complete and charming portrait emerges.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 July 2007

Kind of bounces along, nice Rhythm to it...10

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Max Reif 07 July 2007

says something. You have something to say here, and you say it.

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Raveendran . 07 July 2007

Good work. There is a nice beat, suits the mood.

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Yvonne Rautenbach

Yvonne Rautenbach

UK
Yvonne Rautenbach
Yvonne Rautenbach
UK
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