Monday, April 17, 2006

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A dark cloud appears before me
Blocking out all that I could see
You carry on and think that all is fine
You don’t hear the clues or see the sign
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Becky Ginn
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Charlie Button 05 November 2006

.... these clues, we pick up on but choose to ignore. (not sure what I am tying to say but that part means something to me! ! ! !)

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Scarlett Treat 02 September 2006

There seems to be some ambiguity about this poem, like the line about love and hope being there but gone. I doubt very much the person in the poem really wants to be alone, but is putting on a brave front?

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