Thursday, February 1, 2007

Ash To Ash Comments

Rating: 4.5

The shards of life piece together to make us incomplete,
Without rules we are lost in a maze of despair,
Trapped amongst the branches that hold us up,
But what do we do with all the evil clowns at the town fair.
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Kevin Patrick 11 November 2014

Extremely well written there were some great lines in hear, a wonderful self portrait of human nature and the faucets of human identity. Pretty good poem of the day

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 November 2014

A bit lengthy yet beautiful lovely write

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Liliana ~el 11 November 2013

Deep and haunting; revealing life behind the scenes

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Emily Oldham 19 October 2008

another absolutely amazing poem... just wow... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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