Ash Misguided Comments

Well-written, can we see the beauty when its covered by less appealing outer garments? Thank you for posting, L&T

Symbolic in every way is this piece of yours. What an excellent piece to read.

Indeed - a multisensory journey...a mystery...the imagery... I liked this on a first read - great stuff, Moth!

all the way down to smell on this one, you've hit every sense. The imagery is raw and vivid, and there's something else going on i can't quite place. Great stuff!

There is some symbolism in this one, and it went with the flow. NICELY DONE! ! !