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Ascend To Damnation Comments

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Ascend to damnation
Day or night
Power of mind control
Black or white,
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Danny Draper
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Captain Cur 06 June 2012

I liked the beginning concept and how you developed and rode the thought of the poem to its stellar conclusion. Good write.

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Valerie Dohren 03 June 2012

Love the last two lines, very inspired write.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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