Thursday, February 1, 2007

As You'Re Gone Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling left out,
In this happy celebration of New Years Day.
Sitting there,
Feeling Numb.
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Hazel Mc Taggart
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Brian Dorn 09 February 2007

Sad, but certainly heartfelt. A difficult subject but very well written and expressed. Brian

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Martine Kolber 01 February 2007

Touching.. The pain you feel is so real and you make the reader feel it too.. Excellent. Take care, Martine

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