Flashes of lightning
When you smile
Thunder showers
When you weep
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Like the scent of rosewater on a summer's day...Great writing.Picture perfect my friend.Geoffrey.
Wonderful! It seems an analysis of all the laudable things in that queen of actresses.
what a description of affection.sweet, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
So cool! What a great poem. I love your metaphors and the form you've chosen. I'm sure she will treasure this word picture of her that you've painted.
Nice to read, it takes me to third heaven,