Wednesday, October 26, 2016

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Flashes of lightning
When you smile
Thunder showers
When you weep
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Vijay Sai R
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Nice to read, it takes me to third heaven,

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Geoffrey Fafard 28 October 2016

Like the scent of rosewater on a summer's day...Great writing.Picture perfect my friend.Geoffrey.

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 October 2016

Wonderful! It seems an analysis of all the laudable things in that queen of actresses.

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Madhabi Banerjee 27 October 2016

what a description of affection.sweet, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Debra Deveney 27 October 2016

How sweet this poem is. Hear how much he loves her.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 26 October 2016

So cool! What a great poem. I love your metaphors and the form you've chosen. I'm sure she will treasure this word picture of her that you've painted.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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