As You Have Come Comments
As you have come,
Birds sing in my mind
Creepers blossom
With numerous smells unknown….
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Beautiful. Verses of strong emotion.Wish you all the best
Marvellous poem that deserves top stars. Wishing you a great year ahead. Thank you too, for all your lovely comments on my poems.
As the birds sing, as the creepers blossom, as the water turns into laughter- love blooms so sweetly.
Dear Pallab, this is a wonderful poem that is a coming, an awakening of a serene love that so beautifully merges with the divine blessings of nature.
How elegantly is the poet welcoming the arrival of his sweet heart
Wow---What a lovely write! Each line so full of beauty and love.To My Poem List!
A nice feeling of love and joy very beautifully expressed in the poem.
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A magnificent piece of poetry on love and life! The last stanza is my favourite. This is one of your best creations! I find pleasure reading this wonderful poem time and again.
tu aa gaee hai meri soee kalam uth baithi hai mohabbat ki nazmaiN likh rehi hai
tu aa gaaee hai parinday geet gaa rahey haiN gulaabi phooloN ki mehak aa rehi hai
The poet expresses his own images in every stanza. An innovative writer he is! - Rajendran muthiah.
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Wow! A very positive feedback from you. Thank you a lot. With best wishes pc
A great work my friend! Fascinating poetic expression with a great poetic depth! My pleasure revisiting it.
Nice to see a very positive comment from you. Stay blessed, my dear... PC
The step-stones of river submerse. The songs of water Turn into laughter... beautiful expressions of joy.... sooo poetic dear poet Pallab.. tony
Thank you for sharing with me the feeling you got. With best wishes.
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7/19/2025 3:18:27 PM # 1.0.0
As you have come, The pen awakes up from hibernation. Superb imagery. Beautiful poem.