As You Come To My Senses....... Comments

The feeling of love, calmness and enjoyment is well intensified in the poem with a rather splendid description of what every pure soul wishes for and desires to have attained otherwise.....10/10

as you comet to my senses....... the last line really superb as written by ashraful musaddeq........ just breathtaking lines.........see my 10 ++

A beautiful poem. Last two lines are wonderful. Love it,10+

a deep, touchong and welled poem...so beautifully penned..10+++++++ go, an extra mile for the step i stop, may leads your way to find the real and genuine high way of what you want to reach; the sand dunes, ashore the beautiful pebbles of every rock shattered in the cliff of water open of what is close and please close of what was is open to accept the heraldic search of what is the senses find, as the ending song started of every lyric you sing, and begins in your harmonics tune in the key of C come and as you leave, to what you'll have started; stay and forward, hold your day's of the past, aim high and accept of what is weak, before a winner shout for joy in every heart that call hold my hand and forget the day, soon you will find and reach the sky.....of today