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a beautifully written poem. so you win the pearl gift man out of bottom of sea.

a nice write. So you win the pear; gift man out of bottom of sea.

Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine / beautiful line this is the poem of great hope with slight disparity , confident so high based on emotion a lovely one.10

so it's hard to win the pearl of love that rests deep down in heart-heart like an ocean, beautiful imagery and very emotional write

a mind blowing and a cracking poem..in the following lines.. which ends the poem magnificently,100 / 10 ha ha.........Then woman’s secret Hidden in deep to see Don’t embrace the sea If u don’t have the will Or weak Stay out At beach Watch And Listen as the waves pass roar Only if u have the courage And the passion to see Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine reveal the beauty deepen Sleeping in her soul go in dare And see So you win the pearl gift man Out of bottom of sea

reveal the beauty, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.