Tuesday, July 6, 2010

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Rating: 4.8

A strange visitor of mine was quite upset,
Sharing his distress with me our feelings they met
Ventured in love to express midnight empathy;
What we looked for was stranger than our sympathy.
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Ajay Seshadri
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i loved this poem sir.. u write very well..

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Bernard Snyder 08 August 2012

Wow! I love this poem Ajay! Great rhyme scheme also!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 August 2012

it is rare we befriend pain as we do gladness He is just a visitor a prince of darkness. well expressed lines based on Indian culture and attitude, because very simple things can make you and I happy.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 July 2010

‘If we treat him with disdain the stay is for sure Now the emotion is lost to days too obscure! ’ ~ Touchy lines …yeah it so happens when situation goes out of reach…light will come next day but with another ‘strange visitor’ vibes… thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Great metaphor. Loved the imagery, so well penned! Enjoyed; D

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Ajay Seshadri

Ajay Seshadri

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