Friday, April 27, 2007

As We Slept Comments

Rating: 5.0

I reached out
as we slept,
slowly waking
finding the bed,
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Stug Jordan
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Original Unknown Girl 27 November 2007

It would be a crime if your words were never published for more to read. This is so beautiful Stug and reminds why I loved reading you from the off.... Wonderful piece! HG: -) xx

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 29 October 2007

What a way with words Stug! I love this piece...the imagery is so real and easy to see. Great title and just a wonder filled piece of poetry... I especially love the last verse! =Shelley=

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Bernard Alain 08 June 2007

I enjoyed this very much as well Stug, the stylings verys similar to that of Dunstan Attard (Malta) , I think the spirirual overtones and unobtrusive imagery work well here. I will be back to read more of your fine poetry later. Bernie

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Alison Cassidy 05 May 2007

Fascinating piece - a stream of conscious winter reverie penned with love. Wonderful. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

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Anna Russell 03 May 2007

This is gorgeous, you have a wonderful way with words. Hugs Anna xxx

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I think you wrote this quickly and I think it's rather beautiful - one of those of-the-tongue pieces. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2007

God this is good, there are some blinding lines in here. It seems effortless and flows so very smoothly. HG: -) xx

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Stug Jordan

Norfolk, UK
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