As We Sail.... Comments
Knock, knock open the door
To my scary heart,
You're my best part,
My tormented mind
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Beauty of thoughts sailing in emotion of an ocean, an amazing poem.....................10
With your wise eyes stripping away my past.... Touching line. Excellent write Hazel. You always move me with your every word. You most certainly deserve this beautiful friend. X
Knock, knock and open the door of heart and see how much love is dwelling. Wonderful and heart touching in travel of life. Beautiful as we sail....
You are number one due to skill of your heart and mind.It seems you have written with open and cheerful mind Thanks for sharing.
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7/23/2025 8:53:39 AM # 1.0.0
I like the blending of contrasts in this poem: it starts in a sad, melancholic mood, and it triumphs with jocundity!