Tuesday, January 22, 2008

As We Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dream of white, snow newly laid,
Lines of footprints, all freshly made,
As across the ground we go,
Leaving our footprints in the snow.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 13 March 2008

Excellently written again Ernestine, the repeats work really well and paint a different scene in each verse. Andrew x

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Thad Wilk 27 January 2008

A dreamy & lovely poem Ernestine! And a pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! ! ! May your rainbow follow each rain, And your great gift of poetry that you share, never wain! Friend Thad

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Ewigi Liebe 25 January 2008

Ernestine, beautiful write indeed..its flowing each piece of your words I could truly feel the beat on it..and you are one of the best... Best regards and god bless you love Mary

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Duncan Wyllie 24 January 2008

This is a beautifully stuctured piece Ernestine, nature at a very beautiful stage Love duncan X

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Lynda Robson 22 January 2008

A lovely write about nature's colours, and at the moment just a dream with this constant rain, excellent Ernestine, Love Lynda xx

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