A dream of white, snow newly laid,
Lines of footprints, all freshly made,
As across the ground we go,
Leaving our footprints in the snow.
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A dreamy & lovely poem Ernestine! And a pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! ! ! May your rainbow follow each rain, And your great gift of poetry that you share, never wain! Friend Thad
Ernestine, beautiful write indeed..its flowing each piece of your words I could truly feel the beat on it..and you are one of the best... Best regards and god bless you love Mary
This is a beautifully stuctured piece Ernestine, nature at a very beautiful stage Love duncan X
A lovely write about nature's colours, and at the moment just a dream with this constant rain, excellent Ernestine, Love Lynda xx
Excellently written again Ernestine, the repeats work really well and paint a different scene in each verse. Andrew x