Tuesday, July 28, 2020

As We Entered Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we entered the vast doorway of dreams
Things were decidedly not what they seemed.
All that was bright was cloaked in endless night.
All that was heavy became very light.
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Shaun Cronick 28 July 2020

A very well written and imagined poem Dominic and it seems to me a journey between ever changing light and shadow. Like a mind's eye labyrinth being reconfigured constantly. I would select this as a member poem of the day.10+ and added to my favs. Thank you Dominic and one to reread many times over.

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