As We Crawl Into Bed Comments

Beautiful and very romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

You make everything sound so beautiful and perfect! Lovely poem...

'The plains of desire I cross so slowly with care Skirting the whirlpool in the centre there Gliding down, hesitating a detour here I take The thighs of Venus do awake' simply great...very passionate indeed....sensous..yes.thanks..rite more 10+++

This is beautiful....strangely i could imagine this happening...very very senusual and just....excellent 10/10 -Tyease

Another journey into eriticism from the poets unique pen. Few can portray the innocence of love with such passion imagery, and well considered detail. Steve