Friday, May 23, 2008

As We Become Old Comments

Rating: 3.9

Life it feels is closing in,
maybe Im close, to the bitter sweet end;
I truely feel I, am getting quite old,
I find myself tenitive, where I used to be bold.
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Dwayne Bailey
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 May 2008

old is gold, our life behind, follows the trail of golden dust, will still lingers in the atmosphere, when we're no longer here.

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Thad Wilk 24 May 2008

Hi Dwayne! You may be getting older, but your also getting, wiser! Great read! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Rani Turton 23 May 2008

Thought are put down with elegance. Getting old or getting older is hard for the body and hard for the mind, but is it modern society that has transformed age into a burden? Is it because of individualism? So many many questions.

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Marvin Brato 23 May 2008

Heartwarming message you got here Dwayne, great write! A 10.

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Dwayne Bailey

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