Thursday, October 2, 2008

As Warm Words Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I lay there just talking to you
And closed my eyes I could feel you too
Your words are like a warm embrace
I could almost feel your fingers trace
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Tia Maria
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The Dreamer 20 May 2009

Tia - Again your poems bring a smile to my face thank you

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Philip Kirkland 14 October 2008

Kinda warm 'n' cosy poem - hits the spot!

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Bob Blackwell 13 October 2008

Nice write....some moments do need privacy

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Peya Jakob 13 October 2008

Perfect romance...Wow

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 October 2008

Very nice rhyming poetry I like dsit..* 10

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Adam Day 03 October 2008

as i near the end of this poem my mind drifted off to past memories. thank you for bringing me memories =) wonderful read! ! ! ! !

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 October 2008

A perfect moment shared, what wonders await him there... Andy 10

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