Saturday, May 5, 2018

As Titanium Comments

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Inseparable creatures tied with a cord
Flexible like silken steel, as titanium
Extending over oceans, filaments
Enclosing in a vacuum, sealed
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Doris Cornago
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Kostas Lagos 05 May 2018

A great poem about how complicated love is.Nice structure of poem.

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Doris Cornago 05 May 2018

Yes. God is love. But he is in each one of us. That's the simplification and complication of it. How can anything that feels right be so wrong? A rhetoric question which takes us back to base One - he is a jealous God.: -)

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Doris Cornago 05 May 2018

Love is a connection to who you are and what more you can be and if you step into this path of self-discovery, there are no guarantees that you won't get hurt. From what I know of such relationships, there is no boundary of what should be, what cannot be - and the moment you get into expectations, there lies the rub, love cannot be ordered from pharmacy. It's inexact, no one size fits all, and it truly boggles the mind.

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