Saturday, November 18, 2006

As Time Slips By - Acrostic Sonnet Comments

Rating: 3.5

As time sleeps by love’s tide [s]weeps sluggard, cold,
Slow beats heart's flow, forgets dreams' heats once sought.
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Patricia Gale 18 November 2006

Outstanding work, I did enjoy.

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