Sunday, May 3, 2009

As Time Passes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Covered in darkness I sit alone
Time continues to pass
While I sit in the dark
Alone
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Alyssa Baker
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Jayce McCormick 30 October 2009

Very good poem. Lots of emotion and this is kinda like my writing style of some of my poems, so I can relate. Great work!

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