Monday, June 24, 2013

As Time Moves On Comments

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I look beyond an endless sky,
To feel the tears fall from my eyes,
Remember us just as we were,
Then in the distance I still hear,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Davies 06 September 2013

Thanks Sandra! Glad you like it!

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Sandra Feldman 13 August 2013

I will Remember you're beautiful poem and its tender, forlorn sentiment. Thank you, very musical, tranmits a lot of feeling.

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Jayne Davies 08 July 2013

Thanks for the lovely comment John! Glad you like it!

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John Hess 07 July 2013

Very touching... The heart aches for times of old, the trick is to move on- -so we are told. Keep writing it helps, and hopefully one day soon life will smile upon you.

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Jayne Davies 24 June 2013

Thank you Pradip! Glad you like it!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 June 2013

some things are just not meant to be, it tells all about love and the residues of its aching memory. You have woven it nice Jayne.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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