As Time Goes By (C) 6-17-07 Comments

i love that poem its really good and to be honest thats whats happening to me right now.....but anyways awesome poem :)

Awesome poem! I love it :)

I've definitely felt like that before. I thought this was great.

Great poem...I give a 10 to the max...

WOW...i loved this poem...i was just waiting to find out why it was that he wasn't there.. and then boom... i had to re-read it.... loved it to the fullest.. i give it a 10

I love the anticipation and desperation :) i love your poetry not quite intellectual, but said easy for the simple minded to read Like me, Thank you

I've felt this way before a brilliant poem

As Alexander Pope said 'Hope springs eternal in the human breast', but how often have we confused hope with fantasy and illusion. Been there, done that, maybe about a million times - hoping, when there was nothing to hope for. Great poem, Corey.

Very sad poem, but I love it

I understand this poem well...waiting in anticipation for that word then the desperation wears off..too lead into other emotions Well written...a touch of sadness in this verse..10++

I love it, sad but -so good! !

awesome poem i like your style

nice to read continue it

Bravo. Well written my friend.

i can really feel the emotion in this poem, good job

wow nice poem! check my poem That Man (boy) ur poem is like what i am feeling right know after that poem i recaminded.10 for me! !

wow real nice it made me think a lot