As Time Goes By Comments

This poem shows great sadness but hope and uses well the device of repetition. Stay positive and keep writing it is great therapy.

things could never be better off that way, for in your heart you have so much to say, and leaving things up in the air and with your parents you can't share

very deep and relatable. i went through similar things when i was younger, i must say that this poem brings back memories but also reminds me of how far i have come and what amazing things can happen in such a short amount of time if we have a little patience. i will definitely have to read more of your poems =)

My parents argued all the time because of me. I am sorry they made you feel like everything was your fault... However space between you and them maybe a break for a while to experiment. Are you able to live without them or opposite... Thanks for sharing yet another great poem! Best Wishes Kay Kay

Very candid and revealing poem, like it a lot.

A nice piece of work which tells more about your life. But, we shouldn't give up in life so easily. So, move on with psotive works and, you will succeed in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

T has alot of meanin in it. Tx dop3!

To kill ones self means the others have won. to stay and work through it and build a better future shows you can not be beaten,

This is a very revealing poem about your past and present mindset...Suicide is not the key...Keep writing, this allows our fears and promises to reveal themselves...good writing