Friday, March 6, 2009

As Time Goes By... Comments

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He tells me im the one
But then all of a sudden he's done
We have came a long way
Getting harder by the day
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Marieta Maglas 29 October 2009

nice simile: ''But then he gives up... And errupts Like a volcano that is under pressure'' nice rhymes, well written poem.............

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