As Time Churns Comments

Once in awhile comes a poem like this which will lull you to a dreamland where you wish you can stay forever. Thanks Valsa

You've recreated the sensations of these experiences in a way that helps us to live them with you. Thank you, Valsa.

hi, valsa! your descriptions make it easy to imagine the sense experiences—good nouns, adjectives, and verbs—so many they'd make a long list. hoping this finds you well, glen

maybe someday you WILL join the stars! you already are a star on PH! ! favorite lines: when the arms of the moon through the vagrant clouds are extended to pamper n' caress me..............'what i wouldn't give to'*** be the arms of the....... ................................................................................ moon over Ernakulam! ! ! and afloat on a dreamy bubble Valsa, are you SURE you sleep at night? or do you stay up all night thinking up fanciful lines for your poems? the whole last stanza is pretty (damn) good also, but i want to put I in front of am. i enjoy so much more a fine poem like this one, sans rhyming, than a poem full of perfect rhymes but which is also 'full' of typos or which i can't understand, or has misspellings, poor grammar, etc. to MyPoemList. bri :) :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - from Google: *** Would Someone Explain The Phrase What I Wouldn't Give Mean... education.blurtit.com/.../would-someone-explain-the-phrase-what-i-wouldnt-give-me... Answer (1 of 1) : It means that you really want something and would give almost anything to get it. - - - - - - - - - - - - - ok, maybe i, bri, wouldn't give almost anything, especially not my freezer full of ice cream.

All nature has to offer us in moments of joy as time churns, the beauty of the simplicity of living is beautifully crafted with the beauty of God's holy presence bathing you in his divine light!

Just beautiful. We must savor n enjoy the simple pleasures n beauty of life because time is fast n these little moments we usually ignore in the fret n fever of life are the moments to be cherished n adored. I'm glad we poets have this instinct n impulse to be drawn to the Nature. A delightful read. Beautifully expressed. A10

But I savour an abiding bliss when God's hands enclose me in a loving embrace and am illumined by the Divine Light Embraces of God appear in many ways, throughout our life we are embraced by God. It starts with the embrace of a mother and ends when we embrace our grandchildren. Sometimes it's embrace of a pet, sometimes it appears in watering the plants. God responds to our love with His own speed bit nature is slow and the response may take a little time to embrace us. We the men loose our patience and are frustrated. That's how I understand this lovely poem.

Illuminated by Divine Light Blessed are those who can say that with delight. You churned out words of nectar with the force of the lashing waves. Thank you.

Lashing emotion of waves sprinkle breeze of attention like for kids and we feel the thrill. Swimming in waves of delight mesmerizes mind entirely. Enjoying the senses thrill and stars remain behind. God's hand encloses us with light. LOVING EMBRACE is seen in DIVINE LIGHT. Very beautiful poem is shared with caring nature. This is excellently penned.10

without pills and meditation such pleasure and calmness in nature, beautiful life and poem.

Those blissful moments are what life is truly about. To feel so alive with the thrill and to know the comfort of sleep in the hands of spirit.