In the beginning I was`nt there...
Like God who was`nt there for good reasons....
But I too emerged from nothingness
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And as there is no other option left.. nice lines...10 i have not made any shift as i have to lift my own weight on two feet
A Beautiful dream of visiting all the planets is fulfilled. Except the Earth you found all the other planets were cool and pleasant. Other planets were not blessed with living beings like our Earth. Your poem just made me think, is it the God to be blamed for all this happenings. I just wonder if Earth would have been like other planets then we wont be here singing any songs.. Really enjoyed reading the poem. A fantastic write.
A nice dream travelling to other planets and not finding any sort of misery there. Coming down to EARTH, your annhilation of the world is really poking at God.Any way as Valsa madam has said you do have his blessings. A good read. ENJOYED.
You have pulverized Him...! ! Still I feel you are held beloved by Him! You have umpteen blessings from Him including a beautiful family with a lovely daughter! Still you enjoy poking Him and still He loves you... Dinesh!
Valsa madam, when you refer to a God whom you treat like a man next everybody`s door, I feel armless and I surrender to your army comprising many mummified conventions personal and institutional. But I fail to see that neighbour as my vision is of 6/6 alone..... Anyway, thank you for the compliment on my family and daughter whether it has got any connection with the unique mischief of God`s own kind.
An interesting and entertaining write as you pose so many questions that can't be answered, but there is truth to be found in all the lies!
lol very nice description of our Planet Earth and how distinct the solar system is........wish we can travel thru all the planets as u did!
WOW'... Dinesh, may be a dream, may be a penning, but utter reluctance with all what happens here is very true. And that is why the in mind speaks like that as you elaborated. MMMMMMMMMMM..... I'm to say If out of 100, only 1 or 2 enjoy this earth and rest all suffer, the it is better to face the blast and better be extinct . Thanks for sharing.