Tuesday, March 8, 2005
As Thee Will'Eth Comments
Rating: ★3.5
For the love of thy night creature,
Call’eth, with thy heart, dark romance’s very teacher.
As thee will’eth on thy heavenly plain,
So shall it be in thy hellish refrain.
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Sandra Osborne
08 March 2005
Well thought out but the rhyme was forced in several places, and the flow really hit some bumps. Try tightening up the lines to the flow and let the poem rhyme effortleesly.
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7/20/2025 2:53:32 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you very much... I shall work on it. Thanks for reading. -RLBIII