Friday, March 17, 2023

As The Years Go By Comments

Rating: 5.0

You'll be in my thoughts,
Forever and a day,
You will be missed,
More than words can say.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Nosheen Irfan 18 March 2023

Purity of love is so rare these days. It's so good to read your poetry that makes me believe love is so simple.

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Jayne Louise Davies 21 March 2023

Thank you Nosheen x So appreciate your lovely comments.

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Pallavi Tripathi 18 March 2023

Hope is the things with feathers

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Jay P Narain 17 March 2023

Beautiful emotional poem

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 March 2023

Thank you so much Jay x

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Kim Barney 17 March 2023

Very nice, Jayne. I especially like the last four lines.

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Jayne Louise Davies 17 March 2023

Thank you so much Kim x So appreciate your lovely comments : )

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 March 2023

I feel the intensity of this poignant poem dear poetess.

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Jayne Louise Davies 17 March 2023

Thank you Dillip : ) So pleased you liked it x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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