Monday, March 8, 2010

As The World Spins Comments

Rating: 5.0

as the world spins
we move faster and as we move faster
the world becomes more of a blur
The wind in my eyes and the frozen tears
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Caitlin KittyBear Daniel
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Ramesh Rai 29 May 2012

How many times should i say, it is a superfine. xlent, brilliant....................................... go on composing poem. it is sure that poem may not give u any monetary benefit but u will get peace and will be able to inspire the world for good deeds. keep it up

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Chloe Francis 10 March 2010

Beautiful Caitlin, simply beautiful. I do wish you would write one about Dahlila, or Simon... They would be better because of their true emotion... Good luck!

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Caitlin KittyBear Daniel

Caitlin KittyBear Daniel

Tyler, TX.... Chapel Hill, NC
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