as the world spins
we move faster and as we move faster
the world becomes more of a blur
The wind in my eyes and the frozen tears
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Beautiful Caitlin, simply beautiful. I do wish you would write one about Dahlila, or Simon... They would be better because of their true emotion... Good luck!
How many times should i say, it is a superfine. xlent, brilliant....................................... go on composing poem. it is sure that poem may not give u any monetary benefit but u will get peace and will be able to inspire the world for good deeds. keep it up