Wednesday, August 6, 2008

As The Winter's Moonlight Falls Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the winter's moonlight falls
Upon the crisp and frozen ground,
We share the night beneath the stars
Which shine so high above,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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How adept you are at using the imagery of cracking ice into the warmth of love and the stars. Just so well written and wonderful. Karin Anderson

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Alison Cassidy 17 August 2008

Love the way you combine the personal and the universal in this glorious wintry love poem. You have a wonderful 'ear' for poetry Andrew and a romantic soul that reminds me of Keats. In particular the lines: 'The puddles iced beside the kerb And cracked like many dreams before, But they will thaw as morning sun Does greet the coming dawn' stood out for me. Another gem from a master wordsmith. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2008

For love this night was born What a great line Andrew, , full of feeling and empathy Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 07 August 2008

Another Splendid poem, as the winters moonlight falls its true It's crystal clear - her loves for you! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend THad

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Ramesh T A 06 August 2008

Wonderful poem! Keep up the optimism!

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