Friday, March 16, 2012

As The Wind Blows Comments

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As the wind blows
and the trees
rustle and sway
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Dave Alan Walker
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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

Erm....no rest for the wicked.....or me lol: -) Creepy!

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Malaya Roses 28 March 2012

Dreams.. Life... and force of inspiring elements might be good or might be deadly on our nature and perseverance... Beautiful reminder... Beautiful poem..! ! ! Thanks for sharing your point of view...

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Unwritten Soul 18 March 2012

As the wind blows I will be waiting to never let you go join the breeze flowing I will never let you follow to go with them, when the wind blowing ....My Brother Dave, sound so scary dont think to leave even we all will go someday let it be a secret so i wont scare when i counting the day_Unwritten Soul

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 18 March 2012

great poem with in-depth meaning!

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Ramesh Rai 17 March 2012

xlent. i liked it.and good composition also.

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Pankajam K 17 March 2012

Wind and the living dead, the juxtaposition is fresh. Good lines.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 March 2012

Quite interesting poem! Good!

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Eric Cockrell 16 March 2012

very good... am working on a more poetic reply!

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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