Monday, December 5, 2005

As The Water Pours Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dewdrops in the night
sparkle on moonlight bay
soothing mist so light
on a dawning autumn day
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Cynthia Aluning
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Natshia Bellgini 15 December 2005

Really find piece of writing. Natshia

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Joseph Daly 09 December 2005

A particularly wonderful piece, full of excellent imageryto the extent that it is almost as if Salvador Dali took time off frompainting and wrote this. The line' 'a swamp filled with swans' particularly stands out as an unreality that has become real.

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Anthony Dalby 08 December 2005

I love this one. Thank you Anthony

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Cynthia Aluning

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