Tuesday, May 9, 2006

As The Walls Fall Comments

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i stood there as my walls of rock fell
these walls fell because i was sad and lonley
i built those walls cuz i wanted protection
they stayed up till he showed up again
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jessica roberts
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BEAU GOLDEN 30 March 2007

The metaphor of the rock walls as your pains is very advanced for such a young poet. great art.

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Brian Dorn 09 May 2006

Jessica, sometimes there are no walls strong enough to protect us from those who hold the keys to our heart. Good write! ! Brian

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