Sunday, June 8, 2008

As The Time Passed Bye Comments

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In this place
It’s empty
It’s boring
I could do nothing
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Hana 1225
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Blue Eyes 22 November 2008

this poem is very nice.i like the rising action of it its sth u can`t find in most of the poems its unique.

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Manonton Dalan 04 October 2008

i could relate to you. play soduku or write poems. truthful expression. beautiful poem. thanks.md

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Trinity K 22 June 2008

we will do what is required what is conspired we be good we be lonely but we will BE! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Andre Lopez 15 June 2008

it describes well the feeling of loneliness

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